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If we're telling a story about a man who needs to lose thirty pounds and suddenly decides to do it of his own volition, the audience will check out, Why? Because that's not how life works. There needs to be a reason. Our character has to run into a high school sweetheart who is now a yoga instructor, or he needs to lose a bet, forcing him to run a marathon. Characters only take action after they are challenged by an outside force.

Sary Building A Storybrand, page 34 · December 14, 2024 Save to shelf
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