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Strategies for preserving and enhancing surprise: 1. Avoid thesis statements in storytelling. 2. Heighten the contrast between the surprise and the moment just before the surprise. 3 Use stakes to increase surprise. + Aroid giving away the surprise in your story by hiding portant information that will pay off later (planting bombs). This is done by: Obscuring them in a list of other details or examples. • Placing them as far away from the surprise as possible •Whan possible, buil ding a laugh around them to fur ther camoufage their importance.

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