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Where to put humor: 3- Take a breath The third time I make the audience laugh is immediately following the accident. I want my audience to laugh here because they have iust endured the details of a horrific car accident, and I need to break the tension. The audience needs to take a breath. Whenever a story has become exceptionally tense and the audience needs to reset, a laugh is the best way to do this.

Sary Storyworthy, page 245 · September 11, 2023 Save to shelf
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