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Stakes strategies: 3) Breadcrumbs Storytellers use Breadcrumbs when we hint at a future event but only reveal enough to keep the audience guessing. In "Charity Thief," I drop a Breadcrumb when I say: But as I climb back into the car, I see my crumpled McDonald's uniform on the backseat, and I suddenly have an idea. During a workshop, sometimes I'll stop the story right there and ask my students what they are thinking. Their responses are hilarious.

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