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Tips for writing Email copy: 7. Use short paragraphs. When somebody clicks to open your email, make sure the text that unfolds doesn't look like a book. They didn't sign up to read Tolstoy. By breaking up the text into short, separated paragraphs the email looks like it will not take them much time and so they'll be more likely to read it. 8. Use active language. Active verbs make a sentence interesting. Instead of saying "we are having a sale" say "you're going to want to barge through our door because we've walked through the shop and lowered prices on most of our products." Words like "barge" and "walked" and "lowered" are interesting because they connote movement.

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